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Hello Howard,

If you're here to see the revised keyboard sketch, with the rough color added, just click here: revised keyboard sketch

 

Here are the revised layouts.

I had a difficult time with a couple of the references, (such as the office floorplan blueprint), which I will refine further for final art.

In general, the color is muted natural color, with blueprint toned backgrounds. We could also lean more toward the tones of a sepia print if you thought that would be more suitable to the brochure.

The assembled artwork is in a layered photoshop format, and it is easy to move the elements around to produce different layouts. If the shown circle layout is too static, I'll play with it some more.

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revised layout with words
Here is the layout with words revision. Let me know what edits you have on the words, and how you feel about them overlapping the images. They are grey, and will differentiate better when the artwork is in color.
Revised layout, hand variation, no words
This layout shows a different hand position, and the layout without the words.

I have 4 more variations on the hand positions that I like, they each convey a slightly different feeling. The two shown here were my favorites.

New layout with keyboard
The first layout of this idea may need the color coding to pull it together--with color on the keys corresponding to the elements in the circles, or the color background within the circles.

If you think it's worth pursuing I'll add rough color to it. I could also use lines similar to the earlier layouts to convey the connection.

Give me a call with your feedback and I'll move on toward a final!

Thanks, Rose

603-878-3955

 

 

Here are the first sketches if you need them...

Idea number one

Idea number 2

Idea number 2 variation

Idea number 3

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